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Zuko looked out of his glistening bedroom window. Dawn was approaching and the sunlight had just begun to warm his tranquil face. “It was all for this”, he thought to himself. As he turned round and looked towards his peacefully sleeping wife he took a deep breath and sighed. The war had been over for almost ten years and the only traces of the previous Firelord was the scar on his face. Time had moved on, the world had moved on; he had moved on. As the sun began to rise over the beautiful hills that surrounded them Zuko walked over to the bed where the silhouette of his wife lay. She was so different to him, her loving personality, charismatic arrogance, her true heart. He wondered what he had done to deserve her. Slowly he sat down and kissed her forehead tenderly. She smiled and stirred revealing the bump that contained their child.  Her long hair flowing over the pillow like pure woven silk, her skin olive brown compared to his pale white, her warmth. Before him lay everything that he had ever wanted or needed. She filled the space in his heart that had been empty for so long and made him feel whole again. “I love you”, he whispered quietly so that only the two of them could hear. Her eyes opened revealing two deep pools of sapphire blue affection. “I love you too,” she whispered back.
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I LOVE READING THEM!!

Hopefully sooner or later there will be a picture to go with this but until then...

I hope you all like it. I think it's better that I didn't make the fact that his wife is Katara to obvious (or did I). Anyway, I think that it would be just the perfect ending to Zutara and I loved writing it!

I won GreeniyME's contest thingy!!! I'm soooo HAPPY!!This is the pic she drew for me! Isn't it amazing!!!

If you like this you'll love these...

The begininng -> Prologue (of sorts) >> [link]

Part 1 >> [link]

Part 2 >> [link]

Part 3 >> [link]

Part 4 >> [link]

Part 5 >> [link]

Part 6 >> [link]

Part 7 >> [link]

Part 8 >> [link]


Zuko and Katara (c) Mike, Bryan & Nick
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makorra-and-zutara Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet.
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
Thanks!
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Goldencloud Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
You're an amazing writer! Congrats on winning GreenifyME's contest!
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2009
Thank you! I love your avatar!
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perfectcolour Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2008
UAU!
It is simply the best!
I loved! its design is perfect! ^-^
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008
Thanks!
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life-is-precious Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
EYECATCHER ON THE LOSE
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2008
Thanks!
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life-is-precious Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome
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Aloysia Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008
So sweet! You just wanna go 'awww'. I love it!
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
Thanks!!!
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alucards-girl007 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this one too. I'm a big Zutara fan!
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2008
Thanks! For both reading my stuff and commenting!!

I really appreciate it!
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bananas17402 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Student Writer
Love your story... This week would be the actual first week that I write real pure Zutara stories...
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008
Thanks!!

HAPPY ZUTARA WEEK!!! :D
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Senelfy Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awe! *Watery eyes* They're so cute! :heart:
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GigglingZutaraian68 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2008   Writer
this is awesome i love it
(how do u put the emoticons on here plz help )
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Senelfy Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(Just use the smiley faces, or click on 'Emoticons'; it's under the mood-thingy when you comment :))
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GigglingZutaraian68 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2008   Writer
write more to this and my fave part is the whole thing its awesome great job
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2008
Aww thank you!!! I don't think I'll continue this particular fanfic but I have on my others! If you like you could check those out....^^;

Thanks again for commenting! :hug:
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GigglingZutaraian68 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2008   Writer
ur welcome and yes i would like to see some more fanfics there awesome
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2008
YAY! :w00t:

If you click on the links in my signature comment you see some.
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2008
Thanks!!
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Kazulallan Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2008
Zutara FOREVER!!! *loves*
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2008
Thank you!!!
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Kazulallan Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2008
:). anytime
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008
:hug:
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Kazulallan Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008
yay! hugs!!!!
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2008
:cuddle:
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Kazulallan Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2008
awwwwwwwwwwn!!!!
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Zutara444 Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
I love this!
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner May 27, 2008
Thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it!
May I ask what it is you liked in particular???????
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Zutara444 Featured By Owner May 27, 2008
I liked the description and the words you used... it was beautiful!!
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner May 27, 2008
Awww thank you!!!! You've made my day!!! :w00t:
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ToughBabeZMR Featured By Owner May 20, 2008
i loved it !!! it was so sweet and i loved the way you didnt mention it was katara!!! how originale!!!
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner May 22, 2008
Why thank you....:D
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kicksngiggles Featured By Owner May 14, 2008   Writer
Very nice. I personally would have tried to find a way to break the huge paragraph of it, but that format does add a sense of wholeness, so who knows, maybe it works best that way. I really like the imagery in it: "and the only traces of the previous Fire Lord was the scar on his face". While my grammar siren is going nuts, it is a beautiful phrasing.

And if that's all I can find to comment on, that's good. :D Zutara for the win! :XD:
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner May 15, 2008
:laughing: Thank You!!! I'm glad you read it and liked it! Your stuff is good too!!:D

YAY ZUTARA AND ZUTARAIANS EVERYWHERE!!!!:w00t:
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kicksngiggles Featured By Owner May 15, 2008   Writer
Thanks for the compliment. :lol:
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner May 16, 2008
Welcome!
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All4Zutara Featured By Owner May 9, 2008
That was truly beautiful! I was about to call it awesome but it was so sweet that Im about to cry! Plus I feel that Im about to throw up... But its only because i read this really funny thing! Gosh I'm so nocious, thats how good it was!
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner May 10, 2008
Aww thank you.....Please don't cry or else you'll make me cry....:cries:. I hope you feel better after throwing up^^;

Again, thanks for commenting and reading it!!! I really appreciate it!!!

P.S. I love your signature comment!!!
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All4Zutara Featured By Owner May 10, 2008
Yeah... I did feel alot better, well, i didnt exactly throw up but i read it one more time and then saved it. im not really sure how i felt better but right now im getting a knot in my stumuc cuz im typing real slow! I wish i could put down my cerial bar!
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner May 14, 2008
Glad you felt better....cerial bars are tasty!!!
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All4Zutara Featured By Owner May 14, 2008
:)
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xxShadowexx Featured By Owner May 5, 2008
wow, that was GREAT!
i think you should continue this. :]
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner May 6, 2008
Thank You!! :hug:

You never know.....I might.......
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xxShadowexx Featured By Owner May 6, 2008
hehe, good. :]
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somerandomteenager Featured By Owner May 4, 2008
Good job! You're great at writing!
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xxZutaraFanxx Featured By Owner May 5, 2008
Aww man!!! Thank you soo much for reading it, commenting and being sooooooo sweet!!!!:hug:
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